It is still dark.
The crickets sing with delightful abandon.
Outside, the moon is bright and casts
long shadows across the yard.
Cool air moves gently
and is sweet with the scent of
undetermined plants.
A parfum of the waning night.
I hear the trucks
on distant highway,
hurrying to meet their driving deadlines.
They are a melody over the
relentless rhythm of
cricket-song.
Chirp--chirp--chirp.
They play their symphony
frantically, without fail.
The sky is slowly softening toward light
yet Luna,
so intense,
She wears a halo.
It is a fleeting Autumn moment.....
To be gone later in the hours.
But for now,
I savor being one of the
Autumn People.
Pax....
16 comments:
Autumn people, yes....already I feel a shift in the weather, small nuances, but summer is waning....xox Corrine
Same here Corrine.....yesterday early morning had that feel and smell of Autumn on the horizon~~ready to push through at any moment.
None too soon either!
XXOO~~
Anne
anne! this is an amazing poem. you've set a scene that is so perfect for the last line admission you took my breath away.
you are one of the autumn people. good to know, don;t you think?
and anne: you are a poet. first class. i've known this from your banter poems with emily rabbit, but this one: rich and wistful and deep into the soul of things.
♥
kj
Hey Karen,
Thanks!
This is proof I write better BEFORE COFFEE!!! LOL!
Was up very early yesterday and had the studio door open....just enjoying the dark and the long shadows cast by the very bright moon.
And then I slipped out to try and get a photo, and then this.......
Spontaneity.
Cool air.
Waiting for Fall..... :-)
XXOO~~
Anne
What a poem! Full of beauty and soul...(not as in *soul music*)....
I love La Luna.... wish I could have seen her - but you know why I couldn't..... today is - well, like yesterday, ant tomorrow...... grey.
But your poem bought glowing silver light to me!
I am an Autumn person too.....my favourite time of year...
Love,
♥ Robin ♥
Hey Robin!
Either *soul* would work for me~~and I wish I had a higher res camera because that halo around the moon was bigger and pinkish-red! Beautiful!
Save the pic and put it in your window...then grey or no grey, La Luna is there shining on you!
Ah Autumn...hear our call!
XXOO~~
Anne
Lovely imagery. Of course this is a time of day for which I have never intentionally been awake...
Hey Karen,
Weeeeellll, DH had an early morning and left all the lights on...by the time I got back to bed,I was wide awake and thought oh phooey, stay up.
Now I'm glad I did!
XXOO~~
Anne
Am I hearing you all talk about autumn?! I think I live in a different world - it's as summer here as it gets! And will stay that way for at least another six weeks. Please enjoy those crisp mornings for me... Love, Silke
aaah, Me too, an Autumn person even though I am a Leo!
beautiful post Ms. Anne. My, now that I'm a working girl I'm always late.
And you ARE a poet ;)
xoxo
Lo♥♥
Hey Silke,
It is just breaths and tidbits of Autumn in the morning air.
If it's any consolation, we're right beck to somewhat cool but extremely HUMID this morning~~feels like weather coming in....pffft!
XXOO~~
Anne
Hey Lolo,
Late or otherwise, I'm glad you made it! I am not exactly a burning font of energy myself these days...LOL!!!
XXOO~~
Anne
i've come back to say good morning! and to read your observant poem again.
good morning!!
♥
Goooooooooood Morning!!! :-D
Been in the cellar painting.
My hands are a mess.
:-)
XXOO~~
Anne
Anne this is just beautiful. However, I hope fall is not on it's way we just got summer two weeks ago.
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Nicole/Beadwright
Hi Nicole,
How about I send the rest of our Summer your way? And then Autumn can just waltz in.... ;-D
Be over by your blog~~thanks for stopping by!
XXOO~~
Anne
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